2004-10-15 [Queen of Stars]: I'll read it when I have more time, I liked the last one, so I'm sure that I'll like this one too.

2004-10-17 [eyes of frost]: well that is the mysery of writing! Muahaha.....if you need soemthing explained just message me and I will be happy to tell you whats going on...all except my mom -glares at stars- your not getting it out of me mom...You have to read it! muahahahahaha

2004-10-18 [Queen of Stars]: That's what you think. I'm mom and I know you all to well. Tee-hee.

2004-10-19 [eyes of frost]: Yes, but you do not know where I keep my floppy that this story is on! Muah-ah-ah-ah-ah!

2004-10-19 [the 5th apocalyptic horseman]: wooohooohooohoohoo! new beginning! i looooooove it! kkep on wrting, pleeeeaaaassssseee....

2004-10-20 [Queen of Stars]: Oh, but I do know such wonderful ways to torture you to get the infomation out of you. Tee-hee. Remember, I'm mom and we all get crash courses on torture. 

2004-10-21 [eyes of frost]: Well...i dont care. You wont know till you read. What do you think mom?

2004-10-25 [Queen of Stars]: 9th paragraph down what needs to be why. on living relative, needs to be a living relative. child services have, needs to be child services hasn't. Not to bad yet, but I need more to make an informed decision about it. Still the critic to the end. Totally different so far from the last time that you wrote it. Good job. Can't wait to read more. Though I just might get you to let me read it in advance. 

2004-10-25 [eyes of frost]: i dont think so mom. never! my mashed potatoe mounds of doom will eat you befoe I read it...muahahahahahaha

2004-10-26 [mywolfalways]: Hmmm...interesting.

2004-10-28 [Queen of Stars]: what's interesting, her story or our conversation? Have to finish reading the changes now. Talk to you again soon.

2004-10-28 [mywolfalways]: The story. 

2004-10-31 [Queen of Stars]: yes, I agree totally. It's very interesting so far. Am waiting patiently for her to write the rest.

2004-11-03 [the 5th apocalyptic horseman]: very interesting, yes, but also very different from the old version... very, very different. but not bad, not bad at all...

2004-11-06 [eyes of frost]: Well...if you guys want the other one back then I will put it up.

2004-11-10 [Queen of Stars]: I want the other one, I want the other one. I neeeeeeddddddd to see what's going to happen next on that one. Can't you write both of them just give them different titles like book 1 and book 2?

2004-11-12 [the 5th apocalyptic horseman]: yeah. i kinda looooves the old one and im not entirely sure this one's gonna be better... im not even sure thats possible <^,.,,.,^>

2004-11-12 [Queen of Stars]: See, I'm not the only one!!!!!! But I'm also not saying to give up on this one either. You could write both of them at the same time. Hell, a lot of writer's already have their second work in progress before they finish the first, that's how they get so many books out a year. I'm good, I'm good and I'm still the momma. Tee-hee

2004-11-18 [the 5th apocalyptic horseman]: heehee. well yeah im writing on a whole bunch of stuff at the same time but not getting anything finished.

2004-11-20 [Queen of Stars]: No it will take you a little longer, but they will get done. Good luck in your writing katraka. I'm sure it's good as well.

2004-11-27 [the 5th apocalyptic horseman]: thanks. well actually... right now im kinda stuck but i dont have tiome to write anyways. hey, i see the old one is back up...